I like the idea here, but honestly I'm not too keen on that shot for two reasons:
* I think the point of view is a bit too high. I understand that if you had tilted up, you might have lost that alignment, but maybe you could have framed a little lower or cropped in.
* I think the contrast is a little flat. I feel like there's almost a white semi-transparent mask on that picture.

This is just my opinion, please don't take it wrong, I love your work.